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Sometimes I wonder why,
I wonder why I do my best to understand
I understand how I do to handle these words,
I wonder why I believe in us.
Sometimes I think,
I think that you are kidding me
I know I'm wrong,
but sometimes I think...
Sometimes I think
I should be dead and buried,
buried by Love,
burried by the life,
burried by people around me.
Sometimes I believe,
I believe I'm not the only one
I believe that I should take all the things
the things that could keep me away from life
Sometimes I believe...
Sometimes I want,
I want to be important for you,
I want to be there with you
I want to go away from you
I want to love you.
Sometimes I am
I am this child scared of all
I am scared to be leave alone...
No surprise,
I am alone and empty.
Sometimes I die,
I die because of Love,
I die because of rude words
I die of desire
I die. Of emptiness.
Sometimes I need,
I need to cry,
I need to fight,
I need to scream,
I need to love,
I need to pretend to be fine
I need...you.
Sometimes Charlotte is sad,
Sometimes Charlotte have to be handle with care
Sometimes Charlotte can be killed by Her.
Her is always here,
Charlotte try to hide Her,
but Her always keep an eye on Charlotte,
because if she can kill Charlotte,
She will.
Sometimes, Charlotte wonder,
If she's in love with Her,
Her,
The Charlotte's Death.
I wonder why I do my best to understand
I understand how I do to handle these words,
I wonder why I believe in us.
Sometimes I think,
I think that you are kidding me
I know I'm wrong,
but sometimes I think...
Sometimes I think
I should be dead and buried,
buried by Love,
burried by the life,
burried by people around me.
Sometimes I believe,
I believe I'm not the only one
I believe that I should take all the things
the things that could keep me away from life
Sometimes I believe...
Sometimes I want,
I want to be important for you,
I want to be there with you
I want to go away from you
I want to love you.
Sometimes I am
I am this child scared of all
I am scared to be leave alone...
No surprise,
I am alone and empty.
Sometimes I die,
I die because of Love,
I die because of rude words
I die of desire
I die. Of emptiness.
Sometimes I need,
I need to cry,
I need to fight,
I need to scream,
I need to love,
I need to pretend to be fine
I need...you.
Sometimes Charlotte is sad,
Sometimes Charlotte have to be handle with care
Sometimes Charlotte can be killed by Her.
Her is always here,
Charlotte try to hide Her,
but Her always keep an eye on Charlotte,
because if she can kill Charlotte,
She will.
Sometimes, Charlotte wonder,
If she's in love with Her,
Her,
The Charlotte's Death.
Some few sentences, just like that
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Comments11
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI can say that I have felt or thought about every word you have written down. It is great that you can have this affect to your readers because, let's face it, who wants to read something they can't relate to. Even though it is not a rhyming poem, which is okay because rhyming is too mainstream B), you chose a nice selection of words that flow. My overall favorite part of the poem is when you began referring to yourself in third person; it felt as if a child were speaking. I don't know if this is what you were going for, but it felt o me as if you were almost asking for your innocence back from when you were younger.